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incredible reporting but TOO LONG my friend, so few will read it all. give the gist of the story near the top, so many more will get it. Those that want to FULL version will still read it all.

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I wrote the executive summary so that those with the patience for four paragraphs only have something to chew on. At some point I just have to rely on readers to cite the sections they deem most important in the places they think those excerpts will be most useful.

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